Elevated through the rising of the suns,
stars and a black make up on my face,
Making free spirits run away,
in the stylized tomorrow;
Fashion makes me think bigger until i clear my desk,
which is a cluster i often collect as from the world’s rag;
I am fixed in a deep scrolling census of another world,
where i am unable to find my conscience living;
Rag pickers have seen more bounty of nature,
then me as i was enthralled among the already seen ,
could not make it come out of my enclosure,
i resided it in my heart a bit longer;
My elevations in terms of realization,
were narrow,
as i was far more enjoying the scenario;
That time i had nothing more than,
what people call self conscience,
but bad was this as it was more of ego than conscience,
which fitted my wardrobe, which i always wore when i had to dine;
I feel elevated through this,
as today i came across a soul,
heavy with all clothes on but,
a light heart to flow;
There i was made to gave up my conscience and,
soon i realized there’s more to life than,
to file the cries;
My heart was black with tar, not
because of nicotine, but my ego;
I crave for the false,
i always got the false,
material desires of mine,
they never could allow me to make myself mine;
My eyes learned how to shy away from lie’s,
now they know how to face and give a reply;
I got elevated through my own conscience and,
due to which i might have escaped my demise.
- SAHIL KHANNA


Very nice …
Thank you.
Nice…
Thank you For giving it a read.
This poem is good, i guess…
I like the bit were you said… ‘My eyes learned how to shy away from lie’s,
now they know how to face and give a reply’ cool stuff =D
Thanks for the consideration to give my work a read, and i am little confused as you said the poem is good,’ i guess ‘ is that guessing somewhat not nice or is a compliment
its a comment…
good stuff
SORRY A COMPLIMENT…
Yeah i got that .:D from the big smiley
Cool… ;D
Your poem Hope is really nice, i will comment there as well but since we talking here so thought to comment.
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